"This book was poorly written. With choppy, incomplete sentences. That you noticed especially when you were reading to your husband. Out loud. Even reading to yourself. The incomplete sentences drove me. Up the wall."
"Some people are writers because they love to hear the sound of their own voice, I suspect. I suspect this is one of those writers. Not to say the author isn't an amazing writer, very beautiful with the sentences and words and all, but when you hav..."